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Toes in the Rain

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It was a rainy day, it had been raining for about four hours, I look at my window, trying to find something fun to do. I looked at the puddles and said to myself, "Hmm... Why don't I go splash in the puddles?" I went to the living room where my mom sat on the couch reading a book. "Mom, can I go play in the rain? I want to go splash in the puddles." I said. "Sure sweetie, just don't go too far, Chloe." She replied.

I went to the door and slipped off my shoes and then my socks. I opened the door, rolled up my jeans, and took one step into the grass, I looked at my bare feet and said, "Ahh... This feels nice..." as I wiggled my toes in delight. I walked to the first puddle and jumped in and started splashing around. I splashed and I splashed as I smiled and giggled. I walked around to find bigger puddles to have fun in. I then saw a huge puddle beginning next do the forest, and continuing into the forest. Chloe completely forgot that her mother told her not to go far.

I walked into the forest, enjoying my feet being submerged under the water. I really loved the big trees and the vines and ivy wrapped around them. I continued walking on through the forest. A couple seconds later, I started to here footsteps and splashes. I was standing at a big tree covered in vines worried and scared. Out of a bush appeared my mother. "Chloe, I told you not to go far!" she said. "I'm sorry, I forgot all about what you said."
"It's alright, sweetie, but you will be punished."
"I'm sorry! Please don't!"
My mom uttered someone weird. "Vina Entla" All of a sudden, the vines of the big tree wrapped around my wrists and ankles, lifting me up into the air. "Mom, what are you doing?!" I shouted. "Giving you your punishment."

My mom moved her fingers toward my feet as I figured out what she was going to do to me. "Mom, please, don't tickle my feet! Something else, please!" I yelled. I really didn't want to be tickled, my feet were really ticklish. A moment later, I felt a cold finger touch my foot, I giggled, "Hehah mom, dohhuhahehon't do this!!" She moved her fingers around my foot, scratching my soles. "Muahahhamom! Hahhehhahheheh stuhuahop!!"
I couldn't stand the tickling, it got worse and worse, she started to tickle right below and in between my toes! My mom finally stopped and scratched my foot one last time, causing me to let out a giggle. She released me and said, "I'm sorry sweetie, but I told you not to go far, lets head home now." "Fine..." I replied a little mad at my mother.
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